Gender Equality from a Mens Perspective (REWRITING)

it is a very specific topic in middle eastern ethnograpic and political studies
So, notes to this paper is:

1 is the essay which needs to be rewritten (Essay 1 _ Gender Equality from a Mens Perspective.docx)
and the other are responsive essays which need to be incorporated in this essay in some way which I explained in notes in the main essay.

2750 words without bibliography, which would only be the two theories, and citing APA if possible

There does not need to be a title page etc as we have specific formats for that. 

Well, the paper is now below 2750 words, would not be an issue? So there needs to be things added to it here and there.