HOW SENEGAL HAS CONSTRUCTED A NATIONAL IDENTITY SINCE INDEPENDENCE

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– The research question is somewhat confusing, and seems to be trying to draw in a lot of different elements. – No clear thesis statement, and I couldn’t really identify an overarching argument in the paper as a whole–as with the research question, you seem to be covering a lot of different types of identity and a lot of different issues related to each identity. While there are some interesting ideas here, the paper has identity as a topic more than it has a single research question that it answers. – The paper doesn’t contain a review of the general scholarly literature on identity formation/religion in politics/language in politics. – Citations should conform only to Chicago Style author-date format. This style does not use footnotes.