Personal Statement for Law School Admissions

I have written a Law School Admissions Personal Statement and I need it edited. Please make sure the grammer and spelling are correct. Also, that the paper satisfies the below.
1. Concise narrative with one or two points
2.Tells a story where I am the main character and how I changed, grew, or shifted my perspective
3. Contains an activity that shows off my best qualities
4. Conclusions should be self-evident
5. Focus on ME, not an ill relative, remarkable client, or inner workings of an organization where I worked