Scientific and Mathematical/Analytical Inquiry Draft

The first sentence of your second paragraph doesn’t make any sense. You have and its purpose is to offer you need to right in the syntax of how I have you start that sentence off. You also are not writing in the past tense period the research found that. Your transition is not fluid. You should not be saying the purpose of this paper is to you already said that in your introduction. So rephrase it so you have more fluidity. in medical diagnosis two in your second paragraph you start talking about COPD but it’s about pneumonia. You should have an article about pneumonia not COPD. Your second paragraph for medical diagnosis two needs to be indented. You need a transition into economic burden. Your health care costs doesn’t have enough monetary values. You need to include more monetary values related to restaurant diseases related to air pollution. Let’s especially true in your lost productivity.