Tell me about a time when you had to adapt to a wide variety of people by accepting/understanding their perspectives

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I need help rewriting my essay answering the question above. I am an International student-athlete from South Africa. English is my second language and sometimes I struggle to get my point come across well in a limited number of words. The attached essay is what I have written so far to answer the prompt. I know it can be or sound better but I’m not sure how to improve. Please help.